Three Twisted Knots

Tales of the Fae Lands


Mer Moon

Short Stories

I have seen them riding seaward on the waves
Combing the white hair of the waves blown back
When the wind blows the water white and black.

—TS Eliot, The Love Song of J Alfred Prufrock

Her voice is like a soothing wave:
She calls to every doomed desire.
And such a sweet and tempting grave
Awaits past passion: lethe*, retire.

This is her song.

Read me aloud.

Read me aloud and hear in me the sea
Blown back, not unlike that fool Prufrock song.
A fool, indeed. The poet lived too long:
He never saw a siren: guaranteed.

Moon Basking

At night, the pier is empty: fishermen
Have need of early mornings, so the space
Is quiet, perfect for midnight escapes,
And far enough from home that I begin

Mer Moon

At last to soften underneath the moon,
Enough to cross the sea and break the night
With Sirens’ own adjacency to flight
And, liminal, between two realms commune.

Lowering

This wonder-space cannot last long, alas:
The moon’s descent reminds me tasks await
Like songs and luring sailors to their fates
(My flight is flying, so to speak!) At last,

Hello, Sailor

I’ll settle with my lyre upon the pier.
I know you, sailor. Come and find me here.

Notes & Credits:

Items Featured at Enchantment’s Siren’s Song:

  • Hair: Analog Dog (natch!), Aura
  • Trident Necklace: Lantian/Flox, Trident Necklace
  • Skin & Makeup, including super-nifty scale cheeks): Loa, Merea
  • Eyes: Lovelysweet, Tialoc Eyes
  • Riptide Tail Applier: Brine, by Zen Child Designs, Oculi Chakra Mermaid Tail (Body, Third Eye, Fins, Root) You must have the Riptide Mer Tail by Aii&Ego to use this applier.
  • Fishnet Drape, Top, Pearl Strings, and Pastie: Devious Mind, Catch
  • Claws: QE, Leviathan Claws
  • Lyre: HarshLands, Echoes of the Depth
  • Backdrop: Fallen New York (FNY), The Lake Night Backdrop

Other Fancy Stuff:

  • Purple Tentacle Tattoo: Nefekalum, Abyss
  • Nasty Big Pointy Teeth: Contraption, Bento Teeth, The Sharps
  • Eyebrows: Needful Things (NT), Undine Fishtail Brows
  • Carved Gills: Evermore, Siren (carving) tattoo
  • Poses:
    • Photo 1 (Basking): Be My Mannequin?, Sunning
    • Photos 2-4, all from Dovely, Siren
  • Mer Tail: Aii & Ego, Riptide
  • This Siren was styled on a Maitreya Mesh body with a Lelutka EvoX Zo mesh head.

Special thanks to fellow Enchantment blogger Zudrial Rose, who told me where to get these teeth!

* The River Lethe was one of the five rivers of the underworld in Greek mythology. Any mortal who crossed it experienced complete forgetfulness, thus easing the transition into the oblivion of death.

Nerdy Poetry Notes:

TL;DR: This is a very slightly modified Elizabethan Sonnet

Traditionally, an Elizabethan Sonnet (or English Sonnet, or Shakespearean Sonnet, if you prefer) has 14 lines, comprised of

  • Three quatrains, in iambic pentameter, with rhyme scheme ABBA, CDDC, EFFE; and
  • A final couplet, with rhyme scheme GG.

There’s an extra quatrain in this sonnet; or you can consider the “first” quatrain a second epigraph (after the bit in common meter); I’m not bothered either way: the poem needed it.



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Narrators Gwyneth, The Amazing Catwoman, Friðrós, Davi, and whoever else springs out of The Author’s head, live in the parallel universe of Second Life. You can read their stories here, or just scroll down to see what Gwyneth was wearing when she wrote it.

Gwen Enchanted is a story blogger, a fantasy fashion blogger, and a thoughtful in-world photographer.

Caution: contains poetry.